06 November 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 11/6/11






Hello, and Welcome darling sixers! This week's six is from my brand new WIP. Not sure if it's gonna be m/m, m/f, or some combination thereof just yet, so bear with me here. Right now, I know that it's contemporary, it's called Damn That Radio, and my hero, James, is having a pretty tough night.


“I wish my dick was magical,” I say, watching the shooting star as it plummets towards the Earth. “That no one will be able to resist it and as soon as they have it, they’ll want it forever.” I close my eyes and repeat the wish in my head. For half a second, I think I feel something rolling down my spine, leaving a tingling warmth in its place, but a second later and I’m sure I imagined it.
I open my eyes again and the world shimmers in front of me. Fuck that; I am not about to cry over her.

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26 comments:

  1. Oh, I can see where this one is going. Sounds like it's going to be a fun hot read!

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  2. Hey Brien! Love the six (and the photo)! Happy Sunday, my friend!

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  3. What a photo and wow, emotional 6

    SLira writing as BLMorticia

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  4. Very nice. Love the way this is starting to take shape.

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  5. Oh, this is definitely going to be interesting! And very delicious picture, too!

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  6. Oh man. Now THERE is a premise!

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  7. That might be the best 1st line I've ever read.

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  8. Don't all guys already wish that, lol? I love your voice here. Fantastic six!

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  9. A magical dick? Now that would open up the possibilities. Tasting like chocolate would be my wish.

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  10. Oooh, careful what you wish for! Great six, Brien. :)

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  11. aww... poor guy. i can see what trouble he's about to have. lol

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  12. I love the raw emotion in your six. The picture ROCKS, Brien (and so does Graylin's comment above LOL)!

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  13. Nothing wrong with a little wishful thinking. Great six! :)

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  14. Do all men wish for that? lol A good six! Wish away, hot man.

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  15. Your six made me laugh. Magical dick...LOL. Great snip-it.

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  16. Great construction! Loving it.

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  17. Wow! Some people wish on the tooth fairy and some...

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  18. He wants a magic wand?! LOL! And I love your last line. Lots of great characterization here.

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  19. Aw, poor baby! Just one question-did she not like him or not like his dick? Lol! Or is this one and the same for a man? As a woman, I can't imagine making a similar wish, so I really, really appreciate seeing this new pov. :-)

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  20. Kudos! I love authors who can write in the present tense, and write it well. And a magical dick? LMAO! Very clever six.

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