20 November 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 11/20/11






Greeting, my sexy sixers. Are you ready for another six from The House on ShadowBird Lane? This week, one of the House's ghostly inhabitants is...er...piggybacking on one of the guests' more intimate moments.


The glint in her eyes was unmistakable, and half a second later, Stephen was shrugging out of his suit jacket and undoing his pants. He was so hard I felt the pain of it, and at this point, I was just as desperate to get inside her as he was. It had been so long. He unzipped his slacks and shoved them down his thighs a little. His erection sprang forth, longer than any I’d ever seen. A tinge of jealousy dinged my pride and I decided then that, once I’d evicted his soul, this body would be mine.


For more authors who may or may not be taking things that don't belong to them, be sure to check out the official Six Sentence Sunday site here

27 comments:

  1. Love the sexy voyeurism with the super creepy ending. Evicting his soul? Yikes! Great 6, Brien.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Very erotic, and yes, creepy too!

    and love the hottie in the hoodie!

    ReplyDelete
  3. Oh my goodness, I loved it!!! :) Awesome six!

    ReplyDelete
  4. Totally intriguing concept. Sexy!!! Looking forward to reading more.

    ReplyDelete
  5. Soul eviction? I love, love, love it! Very sexy six, Brien! Also enjoying the hoodie hottie above too. (Oh, and Dee's guy? Yeah, he's already taken) ;-)

    ReplyDelete
  6. Love the concept of body tourism! I wouldn't mind giving that a whirl, myself.

    ReplyDelete
  7. oh baby, I think I would keep the body too.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Oh my. This caught me. Yes, the whole sexy thing was nice. But the idea of soul and body snatching is what made me want to read more. LOL Great job!

    ReplyDelete
  9. Lovin' this story. Such a sweet mix of scary and sexy.

    ReplyDelete
  10. God I love it. Not only is he engaging in "really illicit sex" haha, he's body shopping. Awesome!!!

    ReplyDelete
  11. Love the jealousy and possessiveness! You got my attention with these six.

    ReplyDelete
  12. "Once I'd evicted his soul, this body would be mine." Oooo! That made my hair stand on end. Very well done, Brien! :)

    ReplyDelete
  13. Intriguing and daunting scene at the same time. :)

    ReplyDelete
  14. Oh, wow, so whoever this narrator is, he's stolen someone's body? Cool! Very sensual.

    ReplyDelete
  15. Very sexy six. Interesting perspective. I definitely want to keep reading.

    ReplyDelete
  16. '..once I’d evicted his soul, this body would be mine.' Awesome!

    ReplyDelete
  17. lol, well this is a bit different! :D

    ReplyDelete
  18. Well, considering his options, I think taking that particular body is an excellent idea, lol. Fantastic!

    ReplyDelete
  19. Danger LURKS! Very intriguing, like the unusual concept, can't wait to see what happens next! Excellent excerpt!

    ReplyDelete
  20. What a great premise! Yummy six!

    ReplyDelete
  21. Oh! I liked that! Evict his soul, huh?

    ReplyDelete
  22. Shopper's delight! Now that's a Black Friday special. Double six gun salute!

    ReplyDelete