20 November 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 11/20/11






Greeting, my sexy sixers. Are you ready for another six from The House on ShadowBird Lane? This week, one of the House's ghostly inhabitants is...er...piggybacking on one of the guests' more intimate moments.


The glint in her eyes was unmistakable, and half a second later, Stephen was shrugging out of his suit jacket and undoing his pants. He was so hard I felt the pain of it, and at this point, I was just as desperate to get inside her as he was. It had been so long. He unzipped his slacks and shoved them down his thighs a little. His erection sprang forth, longer than any I’d ever seen. A tinge of jealousy dinged my pride and I decided then that, once I’d evicted his soul, this body would be mine.


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27 comments:

  1. Cara Michaels20 November, 2011 07:45

    Love the sexy voyeurism with the super creepy ending. Evicting his soul? Yikes! Great 6, Brien.

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  2. Taryn Kincaid20 November, 2011 08:55

    Very erotic, and yes, creepy too!

    and love the hottie in the hoodie!

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  3. Lacey Wolfe20 November, 2011 09:04

    Oh my goodness, I loved it!!! :) Awesome six!

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  4. Stacey20 November, 2011 09:10

    Totally intriguing concept. Sexy!!! Looking forward to reading more.

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  5. Sandra Renee Pesso20 November, 2011 09:13

    Soul eviction? I love, love, love it! Very sexy six, Brien! Also enjoying the hoodie hottie above too. (Oh, and Dee's guy? Yeah, he's already taken) ;-)

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  6. Unknown20 November, 2011 09:54

    What a creepster! LOL

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  7. Meg Maguire20 November, 2011 09:57

    Love the concept of body tourism! I wouldn't mind giving that a whirl, myself.

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  8. Jayel Kaye20 November, 2011 10:20

    oh baby, I think I would keep the body too.

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  9. Carrie Ann Ryan20 November, 2011 10:51

    Oh my. This caught me. Yes, the whole sexy thing was nice. But the idea of soul and body snatching is what made me want to read more. LOL Great job!

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  10. Anonymous20 November, 2011 10:51

    Whoa! creepy! Great SSS!

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  11. Unknown20 November, 2011 11:47

    Lovin' this story. Such a sweet mix of scary and sexy.

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  12. Gem Sivad20 November, 2011 11:52

    God I love it. Not only is he engaging in "really illicit sex" haha, he's body shopping. Awesome!!!

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  13. Monica Enderle Pierce20 November, 2011 12:09

    Love the jealousy and possessiveness! You got my attention with these six.

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  14. Siobhan Muir20 November, 2011 12:09

    "Once I'd evicted his soul, this body would be mine." Oooo! That made my hair stand on end. Very well done, Brien! :)

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  15. Lorien Lyn20 November, 2011 12:29

    Intriguing and daunting scene at the same time. :)

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  16. S.Lira20 November, 2011 12:47

    Hot six and hot pic!

    :D

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  17. Gemma Parkes20 November, 2011 14:07

    Love the sexy jealousy!

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  18. Unknown20 November, 2011 16:12

    Oh, wow, so whoever this narrator is, he's stolen someone's body? Cool! Very sensual.

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  19. Anonymous20 November, 2011 16:43

    so sexy! Great six!

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  20. Joanne Stewart20 November, 2011 16:55

    Very sexy six. Interesting perspective. I definitely want to keep reading.

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  21. Alix20 November, 2011 17:37

    '..once I’d evicted his soul, this body would be mine.' Awesome!

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  22. Gayle Ramage20 November, 2011 17:41

    lol, well this is a bit different! :D

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  23. Vivien Dean20 November, 2011 18:57

    Well, considering his options, I think taking that particular body is an excellent idea, lol. Fantastic!

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  24. Anonymous20 November, 2011 20:04

    Danger LURKS! Very intriguing, like the unusual concept, can't wait to see what happens next! Excellent excerpt!

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  25. E. Jamie20 November, 2011 22:13

    What a great premise! Yummy six!

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  26. D Carney22 November, 2011 17:36

    Oh! I liked that! Evict his soul, huh?

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  27. Anonymous27 November, 2011 12:23

    Shopper's delight! Now that's a Black Friday special. Double six gun salute!

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