27 November 2011

Six Setence Sunday 11/27/11





Greetings, sixers! This week's six is more from The House on Shadowbird Lane. Sometimes...it's best not to look into mirrors.

 
She was about to turn and walk away when her reflection smirked. Confused, her hand moved to her mouth, but there was no smirk there. “You were just another piece of ass to him,” the mirror Evalyn said.
Evalyn started. That was impossible. Mirrors didn’t talk outside of fairytales.

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25 comments:

  1. Unknown27 November, 2011 04:34

    It seems like they do talk now! Great six and thanks for sharing!

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  2. Cara Michaels27 November, 2011 07:39

    Not only did the mirror image talk, she had some harsh words for Evalyn. Another very cool 6, Brien. Really liking the snippets from this story. :)

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  3. Jayel Kaye27 November, 2011 07:58

    The mirror sometimes tell the truth we don't want to see. Good six

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  4. Alix27 November, 2011 09:08

    Love it! Great idea, and a reflection with attitude, perfect.

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  5. D Carney27 November, 2011 09:13

    Ooh! Creepy and awesome!

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  6. Gemma Parkes27 November, 2011 09:14

    Intriguing, more please!

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  7. Anonymous27 November, 2011 09:25

    Great snippet, Brien, and I love that picture. (His tattoo is so sexy!) Have a wonderful week!

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  8. Carrie Ann Ryan27 November, 2011 09:37

    Creepy. But now I need to know more! Great job!

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  9. Stacey27 November, 2011 10:01

    Oh wow! Awesome...intriguing...totally neat!!! Great snippet!

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  10. Siobhan Muir27 November, 2011 10:33

    Oh-ho-ho! That's a twist she didn't expect. Great six, Brien. :)

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  11. Anonymous27 November, 2011 11:41

    Great six, very intriguing, nice and creepy in a good way.

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  12. Anonymous27 November, 2011 11:45

    Nicely done!

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  13. Xandra James27 November, 2011 12:54

    Interesting! :)

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  14. Vivien Dean27 November, 2011 13:20

    And horror stories, apparently! Very eerie, well done!

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  15. Liz27 November, 2011 13:38

    Hmmm..can't wait to see where this leads

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  16. Meg Maguire27 November, 2011 13:51

    Loved this moment in the mansucript! Rarely do I want to hug and punch a character as equally as I did Evalyn. Well done.

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  17. Taryn Kincaid27 November, 2011 14:23

    Intrigued!

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  18. Sandra Renee Pesso27 November, 2011 15:59

    Oh, I love the talking reflection. Intense six, Brien!

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  19. Gayle Ramage27 November, 2011 17:45

    I love snarky mirror images! More!

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  20. Gem Sivad27 November, 2011 18:00

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  21. Gem Sivad27 November, 2011 18:02

    Fingers fumbled the last one. *Ahem* Your talent and imagination are showing. Great six!

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  22. Anonymous27 November, 2011 19:29

    Wow, intriguing and intense! A great six!

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  23. Jennifer Wilck27 November, 2011 20:56

    Love it! Great six. Can't wait to read more.

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  24. E. Jamie27 November, 2011 23:49

    Creepy six!

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  25. Wendy28 November, 2011 10:31

    Spooky :)

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