Howdy, sixers! I was going to do more from Can't Make You Love Me (my latest release), but considering tomorrow is Halloween, and all I wouldn't feel right not pulling from erotic horror story Last Friday Night. So without further ado: Jessie and Tyler are trying to escape from their captivity, but something is standing in their way.
There didn’t seem to be anything moving in the pitch blackness surrounding them,
but there was definitely something there. Jessie could feel it. Whatever it was
was big, and the more closely he listened, the better he could hear the slow,
shallow breaths coming from its mouth. “What is that?” he asked again.
He could hear the tears in his own voice as the voice from the bedroom replayed
itself in his brain.
'The two of you will face your deepest,
darkest fears.'
Tell me sixers, what are you afraid of? But even if you don't feel like sharing, be sure to check out more authors who may or may not be facing their deepest darkest fears on the Six Sentence Sunday site here.
Wonderful six sentences! I wish you a ton of sales with your books! Happy Sunday and Happy Halloween!
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http://stephanieadkins.blogspot.com/
Thanks for brining back Jessie and Tyler! Love those guys ;-) Sensational spooky six, Brien. And that picture...you do post the best!
ReplyDeleteSpooky six. Nothing scarier than sensing something is in the room with you. Happy Halloween!
ReplyDelete**chills** Way to build the tension. Love that they can't see what it is.
ReplyDeleteOooh, ominous! Perfect for the holiday, too! Well done.
ReplyDeleteSpiders. I'm afraid of big nasty spiders - I couldn't watch that scene in Return of the King up on the mountaintop. *shudder* Spooky six, Brien! :)
ReplyDeleteoh! *shivers*
ReplyDeletei'm with Siobhan.. i hate spiders. nothing worse than seeing a black dot on your ceiling at night just before you're about to fall asleep.
That man scares me! Also, moths. I lways think they're going to fly at my face. Great six!
ReplyDeleteTerrific Six, you hate to leave them in the dark with Whatever! Best wishes (and loved the photo).
ReplyDeleteUm...not getting to finish this story? Does that count as a valid fear? :)
ReplyDeleteGreat six!
oooh that is spooky.
ReplyDeleteGreat 6!
Oooooohhhh okay spooky!
ReplyDeleteWow. Great, suspenseful writing. My fear? That the picture up above isn't real. :-)
ReplyDeleteafter I put my eyeballs back in their sockets, I love your six.
ReplyDeleteNice choice for Halloween!
ReplyDeleteI caught my breath at the last sentence. Awesome job!
ReplyDeleteGreat Six Brien! Perfect choice for Halloween.
ReplyDeleteFantastic six!
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