Remember Saw? Imagine Jigsaw's voice as I say "Hello, sixers". I couldn't stay away from the erotic horror (even though I tried), so this week's six is from my recently completed horror novella The House on ShadowBird Lane. Six co-workers are partying inside a house they don't know is haunted. And one of its inhabitants is watching them.
She sashayed into the room as though she owned it, tight leopard-print garment clinging to her body for dear life; it was far too short to be called a dress, considering it stopped only half an inch below her plump, delectable ass. I longed for the days when I had a body of my own because Lucifer in hell, the things I would have done to her. Her energy glowed around her, blood red and tarnished beyond repair, but her soul was strong. I could feel it. I floated closer to her and tasted her aura, and the damned thing left a taste like rotted meat on my senses so potent I nearly gagged. What kind of horrible person was she?
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This sounds like a terrific story. I love the way you describe her being irresistable and then overlay that with the fact there's something evil there too.
ReplyDeleteOooH l like this! What has she done to create such an aura?
ReplyDeleteLucifer in hell, this was my favorite six of yours yet, Brien! Well done.
ReplyDeleteLike his voice and the interesting details in how he senses the world. Good stuff!!
ReplyDeleteOoh...she sounds like an amazing woman! Awesome six, Brien! Happy Sunday! *Hugs*
ReplyDeleteOh my. I'm hooked.
ReplyDeleteWow! Great description. You had me hooked with the taste of her aura. Well done, Brien! :)
ReplyDeleteLucifer in hell, what a fabulous description!
ReplyDeleteCool six - I really like that this is told from the spirit's point of view. And the woman sounds like quite the enigma.
ReplyDeleteVery rich and very dark! Nice job!
ReplyDeleteLove your description. Very intriguing! :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome six!
ReplyDeleteI like the tactile detail of what her soul tastes like. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteVery intriguing 6, Brien. Love the change up in senses he uses to acquaint himself with her.
ReplyDeleteWow! I love the energy of these six lines. The description of the leopard print dress, fantastic! Sensational six Brien!
ReplyDeleteGreat description, nicely done six.
ReplyDeleteI'm echoing but really good description! Great six.
ReplyDeleteExcellent description here! Well done. :)
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