27 November 2011

Six Setence Sunday 11/27/11





Greetings, sixers! This week's six is more from The House on Shadowbird Lane. Sometimes...it's best not to look into mirrors.

 
She was about to turn and walk away when her reflection smirked. Confused, her hand moved to her mouth, but there was no smirk there. “You were just another piece of ass to him,” the mirror Evalyn said.
Evalyn started. That was impossible. Mirrors didn’t talk outside of fairytales.

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25 comments:

  1. It seems like they do talk now! Great six and thanks for sharing!

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  2. Not only did the mirror image talk, she had some harsh words for Evalyn. Another very cool 6, Brien. Really liking the snippets from this story. :)

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  3. The mirror sometimes tell the truth we don't want to see. Good six

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  4. Love it! Great idea, and a reflection with attitude, perfect.

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  5. Great snippet, Brien, and I love that picture. (His tattoo is so sexy!) Have a wonderful week!

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  6. Creepy. But now I need to know more! Great job!

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  7. Oh wow! Awesome...intriguing...totally neat!!! Great snippet!

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  8. Oh-ho-ho! That's a twist she didn't expect. Great six, Brien. :)

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  9. Great six, very intriguing, nice and creepy in a good way.

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  10. And horror stories, apparently! Very eerie, well done!

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  11. Hmmm..can't wait to see where this leads

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  12. Loved this moment in the mansucript! Rarely do I want to hug and punch a character as equally as I did Evalyn. Well done.

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  13. Oh, I love the talking reflection. Intense six, Brien!

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  14. I love snarky mirror images! More!

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  16. Fingers fumbled the last one. *Ahem* Your talent and imagination are showing. Great six!

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  17. Wow, intriguing and intense! A great six!

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  18. Love it! Great six. Can't wait to read more.

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