tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763389726500713525.post3360243584146308345..comments2023-04-09T09:28:32.112-04:00Comments on A Nightmare in the Making: Six Sentence Sunday 12/18/11Brien Michaelshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09577245543642541579noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763389726500713525.post-44332391016001290642011-12-19T16:27:11.295-05:002011-12-19T16:27:11.295-05:00Great description of her emotions! Happy holidays ...Great description of her emotions! Happy holidays Brien!gemma parkeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06275261646534324484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763389726500713525.post-14701907992984835982011-12-19T07:44:45.993-05:002011-12-19T07:44:45.993-05:00oh, what did she see?oh, what did she see?Jayel Kayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16895398236919824214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763389726500713525.post-76749831899087845422011-12-18T20:47:29.100-05:002011-12-18T20:47:29.100-05:00Intriguing, nice setup of tension and mystery!Intriguing, nice setup of tension and mystery!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763389726500713525.post-57552904376166910742011-12-18T17:57:03.355-05:002011-12-18T17:57:03.355-05:00Oh, that's really creepy. What happens when sh...Oh, that's really creepy. What happens when she falls asleep? Can't wait to find out.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12742618211008888625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763389726500713525.post-73714011868709147282011-12-18T15:47:59.473-05:002011-12-18T15:47:59.473-05:00Great work. I hope you have a very merry Christmas...Great work. I hope you have a very merry Christmas. Happy writing. AxAlixhttp://romancingalix.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763389726500713525.post-14675004116554000402011-12-18T15:42:08.041-05:002011-12-18T15:42:08.041-05:00Spooky, can't decide if she's talking hers...Spooky, can't decide if she's talking herself into the whole situation or if the Other Her really awaits! Great excerpt!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763389726500713525.post-6079750967165047112011-12-18T13:38:40.955-05:002011-12-18T13:38:40.955-05:00Excellent post & storyline! You made me feel ...Excellent post & storyline! You made me feel Evalyn's desperation to fight off sleep, and of course that last line's a great hook. Wonderful premise! Although... the evil inside me doesn't get fought off nearly as hard ;) Happy Sunday, and happy holidays too, since there's no SSS next week.Guilie Castillohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09006999087139126972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763389726500713525.post-78981017179271965772011-12-18T11:33:47.214-05:002011-12-18T11:33:47.214-05:00Stay awake, stay awake, staaayyy awaaakkkke! And j...Stay awake, stay awake, staaayyy awaaakkkke! And just what did she see? Great six as usual, Brien. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763389726500713525.post-57589796486421939122011-12-18T10:23:16.113-05:002011-12-18T10:23:16.113-05:00Hmm... no multiple personalities, but I've sta...Hmm... no multiple personalities, but I've started hearing voices in my head recently.<br /><br />I like the restlessness in this excerpt - is the setup that her alternate persona can only come out after she goes to sleep? Or is that what it used to be, only she sees something in the mirror that suggests it's about to happen while she's awake?<br /><br />Thanks for taking part.<br /><br /><br />I missed the list deadline for this week, but I did get six sentences up! http://kelworthfiles.wordpress.com/2011/12/18/six-sentence-sunday-more-from-children/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763389726500713525.post-42065220716705753942011-12-18T10:20:33.327-05:002011-12-18T10:20:33.327-05:00Great six!Great six!Wendyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00299146463845558413noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763389726500713525.post-41036578962417166212011-12-18T09:19:02.489-05:002011-12-18T09:19:02.489-05:00Love the well-worn carpet detail—really shows us w...Love the well-worn carpet detail—really shows us what a miserable, endless ritual this is for her. Great six!Meg Maguirehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15518696543148231758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6763389726500713525.post-45211230297624100692011-12-18T07:49:54.386-05:002011-12-18T07:49:54.386-05:00Multiple personalities...don't we all have tho...Multiple personalities...don't we all have those? ;)<br /><br />Lots of creepy goodness in these six. :) Happy holidays & best of luck with the sub! Is the campground story next on your project list?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com